我们修正的英文错误

我们的润色师能将您的论文修改得更清楚易懂,替换不适当的辞汇,也修正拼字与文法上的错误。为了改进您稿件的组织性及清晰度,有必要时我们也会改变句子的顺序。

期刊论文遇重大修改或被拒绝的理由

 . Poor writing style and use of English
 . Subject of little novel interest or not generally applicable
 . Authors did not follow manuscript instructions
 . Poor quality supporting figures
 . Not enough contribution to field
 . Faulty methodology
 . Outside the scope of journal
 . Poor written discussion
 . Inadequate references
 . Title not representative of study

Poor writing style and use of English

%

Subject of little novel interest or not generally applicable

%

Authors did not follow manuscript instructions

%

Poor quality supporting figures

%

Not enough contribution to field  

%

以下是根据润色和审阅员的评语,迫使期刊论文被要求修改或退件的英文写作错误

. Redundancy
. Verb Tense
. Passive Voice Errors
. Weak Verbs
. Verb Agreement
. Omitting Comparisons
. Clear Pronouns
. Poor written discussion
. “It” and “There”
. Noun Verb issues

以上资料是从175问审阅员(Reviewer)及润色们在三年期间的评语抽样而成的。每位作者的错误会有所不同。

Redundancy

%

Verb Tense

%

Passive Voice Errors

%

Weak Verbs

%

Verb Agreement

%

我们修改文法,包括名词与动词使用的问题(强势与弱势的动词、动词形态、动词/主词相通)、澄清代名词、修改并删除冗词赘句。我们的润色师也会建议可代替的辞汇或是提醒您将句子从被动语态改成主动语态。
我们的润色师能将您的论文修改得更清楚易懂,替换不适当的辞汇,也修正拼字与文法上的错误。为了改进您稿子的组织性及清晰度,有必要时我们也会改变句子的顺序。我们将需要修改的部分清楚的标明出来供您参考,您可自行决定是否接受我们做的改变。

  • 被动语态修  - Active voice corrections
  • 使用过多名词而非动词  - Noun to verb change corrections
  • 使用强势动词  - Creating strong verbs
  • 避免过度使用 - “It” and “There”
  • 不清楚的代名词  - Use pronouns clearly (they, which, them, this, it, he, she, etc.)
  • 多余和无用的词句  - Deleting redundancy and extra words (while maintaining the author’s meaning)
  • 动词时态变化  -  Verb tense change within a sentence
  • 不完整的对照比较  - Omitting comparisons
  • 主词和动词无法对应  -  Subject and verb agreement

 Active voice corrections

被动语态修正被动语态修正

“Generally, I think you could improve the whole paper by using more active voice sentences. It will improve the flow and allow the reader to follow your meaning.” 1st Reviewer, Journal of Hydrology”

Original 原句

Identification of poor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene and large families as the major causes of poverty was made by Jones (2005).

Modified 修正后

Jones (2005) identifies poor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene and large families as the major causes of poverty.

Original 原句

Consideration of whether countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration is undertaken by Raul (2007).

Modified 修正后

Raul (2007) considers whether countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration.

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Noun to verb change corrections

使用过多名词而非动词

“It seems that many of your errors come from your using nouns instead of verbs. This makes your sentence longer because you need additional “meaningless” verbs to complete your sentences.” Associate Editor, Journal of Retailing

Original 原句

Enumeration of three reasons why the English language has become so important was made by Thompson (2006).

Modified 修正后

Thompson (2006) enumerates three reasons why the English language has become so important.

Original 原句

Discussion of the challenges and strategies for facilitation and promotion of ERP is performed by Smith (2007).

Modified 修正后

Smith (2007) discusses the challenges and strategies for facilitating and promoting ERP.

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Creating strong verbs

使用强势动词

“Another suggestion for your paper is to find a native editor to help you with your verb use. Strong verbs move sentences. Helping verbs often confuse the reader in your technical descriptions.”Reviewer, Journal of Technology Management

Original 原句

Smith (2003) asks the questions as to whether conventional methods are the best environment for execution.

Modified 修正后

Smith (2003) questions whether conventional methods are the best environment for execution.

Original 原句

Smith (2008) makes use of examples of these various techniques as evidence that innovation continues.

Modified 修正后

Rao (2008) uses examples of these various techniques as evidence that innovation continues.

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Avoid starting sentences with the words, “It” and “There”

避免过度使用”It” and “There.” 

Your sentences are too long, especially your methods section! Try cutting them into individual units of complete thought instead of stringing together thoughts without stopping for breath.”– Reviewer, Journal of Water Resource Management

Original 原句

It was vital that quantitative measures would usefully supplement and extend the qualitative analysis.

Modified 修正后

Quantitative measures must usefully supplement and extend qualitative analysis.

Original 原句

It is necessary that the best method to adopt for this investigation was to determined by the committee.

Modified 修正后

The committee must decide the best method to adopt for this investigation.

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Use pronouns clearly
(they, which, them, this, it, he, she, etc.)

不清楚的代名词

“Line 12 on page 3 of your paper is an example of your ongoing problem using pronouns clearly. There are at least 3 different nouns “it” could refer to. You must make your pronoun references clear!” -3rd Reviewer, IEEE Transactions on Advanced Packaging

Original 原句

A case study approach was chosen, this allowed a closer observation of a single specimen.

Modified 修正后

A case study approach was chosen to allow a closer observation of a single specimen.

Original 原句

In most recent studies, they measure X in four different ways.

Modified 修正后

In most recent studies, X is measured in four different ways.

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Deleting redundancy and extra words
(while maintaining the author’s meaning)

多余和无用的词句

“The whole paper should be shorter. I am confident that you could say everything you need to in 30% less space.” – Reviewer, IEEE Journal of Engineering Management

Original 原句

It may be said that there are not fewer than one explanation which could this result.

Modified 修正后

There are several possible explanations for this result.

Original 原句

The current study was unable, insofar as we could determine, to analyze these variables.

Modified 修正后

The current study was unable to analyze these variables.

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 Active voice corrections

动词时态变化
“Your discussion section changes verb tense often. Sometimes you change several times within a sentence. It makes it difficult to understand what has been done and what you are still planning to do” – Reviewer, IEEE Signal Processing Letters

Original 原句

All studies described as using the X procedure are included in the analysis.

Modified 修正后

All studies described as using the X procedure were included in the analysis.

Original 原句

X will be synthesized using the same method that was detailed for Y, using CO2

Modified 修正后

X was synthesized using the same method that was detailed for Y, using CO2.

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Omitting comparisons

不完整的对照比较

“Line 20 of page 2 should read, ‘The finance department focuses on profits more than their department does.'” -1st Reviewer, Finance Review

Original 原句

Country A funds high tech innovation more than Country B.

Modified 修正后

Country A funds high tech innovation more than Country B does.

Original 原句

The device formulated in this experiment has higher luminance.

Modified 修正后

The device formulated in this experiment has higher luminance than conventional models.

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Subject and verb agreement

主词和动词无法对应

“Read the submission guidelines! English should be checked first! There are many basic errors that should have been corrected throughout this paper.” Reviewer, IEEE Transactions on Visualization and Computer Graphics

Original 原句

This paper seek to address the following questions:

Modified 修正后

This paper seeks to address the following questions:

Original 原句

However, there have been no controlled studies which compare difference in X and Y.

Modified 修正后

However, there have been no controlled studies which compare differences in X and Y.

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